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Post by Chelsea/Charles on Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:25 pm

So I like writing poetry and supposedly have some talent at it (according to friends, family, and teachers) But I want you're true opinions

Rescue Me

When you see me here

Trapped in this cage

Now don't you fear

I'm not mean or misbehaved

Just not perfect

Or strong or brave

It's because I'd rather spend my day

Loving and learning and wanting to play

Instead of working or biting or fighting

So i was dumped here to die

By those who "loved" me

Won't you please give me a try

I'll be good and loving

Faithful and true

I've got a big heart

To give up to you

If only you

Keep me from the darkness

That comes to claim me

So that another

Unfortunate soul

Can come and wait

And slowly die

Wanting for nothing

But your love





Punish The Deed, Not the Breed

I am loyal

I want to be your best friend

You are my love my life my everything

So I don't understand

Why you left me here

In this cold, loud, bright place

With nothing left to do to please you

I wouldn't have hurt the little one

I would have been her protecter and friend

But your mother saw me

And one of my breed

Nowhere near me

Hurt her once long ago

Why didn't you save me

Just because I'm a Pittie

Don't hate me

I won't hurt my family and friends

I will been loyal to the end





Love is a myth

A fairy tale

A good story

In real life

Hate is the currency

Traded back and Fourth

From You to me

Why should we care

I've got bigger nukes

To kill your weak, innocent, poor

Golden streets are the

Blood price we pay

For a chance to be an empire




For Jessie An Angel

She sits waiting patiently

For someone to love her

The bars all around

Keeping her here

The barking din

Numbing her mind

The people walk on

Rending her soul

Everytime the footsteps approach

Her heart soars high

But each time they pass her by

"Too old" cries one

"Rotties are mean" the next

"So big" a third

Something is always wrong

So here she waits

For the darkness to claim her

Because she's

"Unwanted"





Once upon a Hell So Dreary
Where i wander weak and Weary
Trying to Keep My Head Held High
Trying not to sink Back To where I Was
But You don't help
Name You call and What You Tell
Is Much more Tale than Fairy

I'm Slowly Dyin Faintly Cryin
Struggling to pull myself up to Heaven
Where At Least i might be loved
It just gets so hard this overrated Thing you call life
I Stay The course and Pull the lead
I try to hard to do the Deed
But Wish I May Wish I Might
I don't Seem Able To Live Tonight

I Wish Good Bye to those I Love
As Snowfall Drifts From Up above
your In My Hearts Your in my Life
You Keep Me Strong In These Dark Days
Waiting For The Night to end
Waiting For my Blood to send
I Try So Hard But My Soul Is Your's to Keep
As I Die Before I Wake






Light me a candle
Your Guardian Angel
High in the clouds
I'll never desert you
until we meet again
So light me a candle
Everyday of your life
By passing on hope and support
To others who must suffer
on earth
Before they join me
protecting you
Never Forget me
Don't let me kill your hope
I was taken for a purpose
God needed another angel
To fill the golden Streets

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Post by Evan on Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:44 pm

They are right. You are good at writing. I like these poems.

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Post by ricky on Sun Apr 13, 2008 4:00 pm

I really like the second to last poem! I like how it imitates Edger Allen Poe's The Raven. I like all the rest of them too! You're a great poet!

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Re: Poems-Charles

Post by Chelsea/Charles on Sun Apr 13, 2008 5:08 pm

*blushes* Thanks

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