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Poems-Charles
So I like writing poetry and supposedly have some talent at it (according to friends, family, and teachers) But I want you're true opinions
Rescue Me
When you see me here
Trapped in this cage
Now don't you fear
I'm not mean or misbehaved
Just not perfect
Or strong or brave
It's because I'd rather spend my day
Loving and learning and wanting to play
Instead of working or biting or fighting
So i was dumped here to die
By those who "loved" me
Won't you please give me a try
I'll be good and loving
Faithful and true
I've got a big heart
To give up to you
If only you
Keep me from the darkness
That comes to claim me
So that another
Unfortunate soul
Can come and wait
And slowly die
Wanting for nothing
But your love
When you see me here
Trapped in this cage
Now don't you fear
I'm not mean or misbehaved
Just not perfect
Or strong or brave
It's because I'd rather spend my day
Loving and learning and wanting to play
Instead of working or biting or fighting
So i was dumped here to die
By those who "loved" me
Won't you please give me a try
I'll be good and loving
Faithful and true
I've got a big heart
To give up to you
If only you
Keep me from the darkness
That comes to claim me
So that another
Unfortunate soul
Can come and wait
And slowly die
Wanting for nothing
But your love
Punish The Deed, Not the Breed
I am loyal
I want to be your best friend
You are my love my life my everything
So I don't understand
Why you left me here
In this cold, loud, bright place
With nothing left to do to please you
I wouldn't have hurt the little one
I would have been her protecter and friend
But your mother saw me
And one of my breed
Nowhere near me
Hurt her once long ago
Why didn't you save me
Just because I'm a Pittie
Don't hate me
I won't hurt my family and friends
I will been loyal to the end
I am loyal
I want to be your best friend
You are my love my life my everything
So I don't understand
Why you left me here
In this cold, loud, bright place
With nothing left to do to please you
I wouldn't have hurt the little one
I would have been her protecter and friend
But your mother saw me
And one of my breed
Nowhere near me
Hurt her once long ago
Why didn't you save me
Just because I'm a Pittie
Don't hate me
I won't hurt my family and friends
I will been loyal to the end
Love is a myth
A fairy tale
A good story
In real life
Hate is the currency
Traded back and Fourth
From You to me
Why should we care
I've got bigger nukes
To kill your weak, innocent, poor
Golden streets are the
Blood price we pay
For a chance to be an empire
A fairy tale
A good story
In real life
Hate is the currency
Traded back and Fourth
From You to me
Why should we care
I've got bigger nukes
To kill your weak, innocent, poor
Golden streets are the
Blood price we pay
For a chance to be an empire
For Jessie An Angel
She sits waiting patiently
For someone to love her
The bars all around
Keeping her here
The barking din
Numbing her mind
The people walk on
Rending her soul
Everytime the footsteps approach
Her heart soars high
But each time they pass her by
"Too old" cries one
"Rotties are mean" the next
"So big" a third
Something is always wrong
So here she waits
For the darkness to claim her
Because she's
"Unwanted"
She sits waiting patiently
For someone to love her
The bars all around
Keeping her here
The barking din
Numbing her mind
The people walk on
Rending her soul
Everytime the footsteps approach
Her heart soars high
But each time they pass her by
"Too old" cries one
"Rotties are mean" the next
"So big" a third
Something is always wrong
So here she waits
For the darkness to claim her
Because she's
"Unwanted"
Once upon a Hell So Dreary
Where i wander weak and Weary
Trying to Keep My Head Held High
Trying not to sink Back To where I Was
But You don't help
Name You call and What You Tell
Is Much more Tale than Fairy
I'm Slowly Dyin Faintly Cryin
Struggling to pull myself up to Heaven
Where At Least i might be loved
It just gets so hard this overrated Thing you call life
I Stay The course and Pull the lead
I try to hard to do the Deed
But Wish I May Wish I Might
I don't Seem Able To Live Tonight
I Wish Good Bye to those I Love
As Snowfall Drifts From Up above
your In My Hearts Your in my Life
You Keep Me Strong In These Dark Days
Waiting For The Night to end
Waiting For my Blood to send
I Try So Hard But My Soul Is Your's to Keep
As I Die Before I Wake
Where i wander weak and Weary
Trying to Keep My Head Held High
Trying not to sink Back To where I Was
But You don't help
Name You call and What You Tell
Is Much more Tale than Fairy
I'm Slowly Dyin Faintly Cryin
Struggling to pull myself up to Heaven
Where At Least i might be loved
It just gets so hard this overrated Thing you call life
I Stay The course and Pull the lead
I try to hard to do the Deed
But Wish I May Wish I Might
I don't Seem Able To Live Tonight
I Wish Good Bye to those I Love
As Snowfall Drifts From Up above
your In My Hearts Your in my Life
You Keep Me Strong In These Dark Days
Waiting For The Night to end
Waiting For my Blood to send
I Try So Hard But My Soul Is Your's to Keep
As I Die Before I Wake
Light me a candle
Your Guardian Angel
High in the clouds
I'll never desert you
until we meet again
So light me a candle
Everyday of your life
By passing on hope and support
To others who must suffer
on earth
Before they join me
protecting you
Never Forget me
Don't let me kill your hope
I was taken for a purpose
God needed another angel
To fill the golden Streets
Your Guardian Angel
High in the clouds
I'll never desert you
until we meet again
So light me a candle
Everyday of your life
By passing on hope and support
To others who must suffer
on earth
Before they join me
protecting you
Never Forget me
Don't let me kill your hope
I was taken for a purpose
God needed another angel
To fill the golden Streets
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Re: Poems-Charles
They are right. You are good at writing. I like these poems.
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Re: Poems-Charles
I really like the second to last poem! I like how it imitates Edger Allen Poe's The Raven. I like all the rest of them too! You're a great poet!
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